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I am looking for a summer job. I will be giving out money to those of you that can help me find one. I will send you my address if you PM me or talk to me in TS. I will post my original resume and my edited resume. (Thanks to R U H O N and princepride for helping with the edits) Feel free to look at both. 

 

The first two screenshots are my updated CV and the other 3 screenshots are my original. 

 

CASH TO THE FIRST PERSON THAT GETS ME A JOB. I LIVE IN THE WASHINGTON, DC AREA. PART TIME OR FULL TIME SUMMER POSITION, DOING PRETTY MUCH ANYTHING. (EXCEPT DELIVERY DRIVER)

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Nice resume. I think your "Objective" section could be altered a little to give a more sophisticated view. Also make sure the correct grammar in used between sentences. eg. comma in the first sentence is missing.

 

Good luck!

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